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First thing I want to say is that everyone has a right to their opinion and then I will begin with mine. I don't agree at all with the bad reviews on this book. I have read the reviews and yes the book does have an abuse survivor in the storyline however, lets just say this its a book and it can have different outcomes. Not every survivor acts the same way. Some are very strong and some are not. And thats where I will leave that subject. This book is a very true love story. Axel has been through some very tough crap in his life and so has Izzy. Sometimes people can go through crap and come out the other side and thats what this book is about. And Axel is just a good hearted guy who wants to protect his woman. In this book yes you will read stories of some horrible things that have happened to Izzy but this book will also tell you how Axel was there for her to help her come out the other side. Axel when you come right down to it has a heart of gold and wants nothing but to protect those he cares about and that includes the guys that make up the Corps Security Company. In my opinion this is a wonderful book. I couldn't put it down. And as soon as I did I had to move immediately on the the next one. I would recommend this book to anyone who reads this genre of books. As people know not everyone is going to like everything thats why we all have opinions and mine are that I love this book and the series.


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Axel Corps Security Book 1 edition by Harper Sloan Romance eBooks Reviews

I started reading Harper Sloan's "Unexpected Fate" but was so lost with so many characters I figured it was book two. Nope, more like book 6 or 7! The Hope Town series features the CHILDREN of Corps Security. Since Dani's dad, Axel, was annoyingly protective, I figured I needed to start all the way back at the beginning.

Axel is a super alpha, translation 6'6, "muscles on top of muscles", he bellows and grunts, and likes to order everyone about...typical alpha. Totally not my type but I could deal with Axel. I'm far more interested in his marine buddies and business partners Greg Cage and Maddox Locke, so I will be continuing with the series just for their stories. There are two more guys, Beck and Coop, so hopefully I'll get interested in them as well.

The heroine, Izzy, ugh at times I wanted to smack her to get her to snap out of it. I get she has had a lot of crap thrown her way, but so much of her angst became filler. She was constantly crying, having a breakdown and then crawling into the arms of Greg and Maddox. If she and Axel would have just communicated a third of the book could have been cut. I get needing some drama to move the plot along, but this was excessive, so I took a star away for that. It was not a slow burn, but more like drama, drama, drama, more drama and then explosive sex. When they finally started talking, it picked up with a good mix of healthy communication, action, suspense, and lots of sexy time.

P.S. Scene stealer award goes to...Sway, who I LOVED!!
I have this problem. When I start a book, I feel compelled to finish reading it. No matter how bad it is. It is a problem I am working on.

When I read books like this, and then see 5 star ratings, I can not help but wonder if I am reading the same book. I usually hold back on scathing reviews. For one, I have a bit of respect for any person who puts themselves on the chopping block by publishing (especially self-pub) their work. Second, I am the fool who read the whole book and didn't get paid to do it, so I need to take on some of the responsibility. This book plot is clichéd, and I could forgive that if it was done well. However, it is so poorly written it is difficult to read. Literally. When an author does not form proper sentences, the flow is thrown off. Not everyone will notice this, or care. We live in a texting and twitter-character-limit world after all. I personally do not appreciate stumbling over sentences. Rereading them to try to figure out what the author means is frustrating and, quite honestly, not my job as the reader! It messes with my reading pace, which throws off my enjoyment of the book. This book would benefit from a skilled editing. Sadly, that would still not fix the myriad of issues this book has in it.

First, I picked this book because it was a (thankfully) freebie posted by another author I read, and I remembered FuriosFotog posting about the cover picture. The blurb seemed interesting enough. I was 16% in and already skimming paragraphs. It is not that it is boring, it is just that there is far too much trivial information. It needs to be condensed better. I found myself blah, blah, blah'ing a lot of it. I skimmed a major part of the book, as in skipped entire paragraphs- pages even- and still feel like I did not miss anything important.

My second issue has to do with writing style. The dialogue is a bit much to handle. At times it is juvenile, other times it is ok but laced with far too many unnecessary swear words - even for a bunch of Marines. The dirty talk outside the bedroom is a bit off putting. I can honestly say in my lifetime, which includes being around some less than tactful, military folk, no one has mentioned needing to be balls deep in their woman so badly. Dee commented that it is "hot" is a bit disturbing. It's not hot, it's creepy. Also, I appreciate an element of surprise. What gets to me though is when authors hint and hint at information without divulging anything. And then by the time they reveal it all, you're like, well duh?!

Izzy has some serious, major, see-a-shrink, issues. Her boozing is a huge red flag of half her issues. I have to keep remembering she is 30, not 13. She is one giant train wreck. I wouldn't wish her saddled with anyone.
Axel had more appeal when he kept his mouth shut.

Few inconsistencies in the story make it hard to track. Even when I was actually paying attention I was confused. Skipping paragraphs seemed less confusing.

This is a series I would not continue with. The other characters held no real interest to me. I don't feel the need to hear their stories.
First thing I want to say is that everyone has a right to their opinion and then I will begin with mine. I don't agree at all with the bad reviews on this book. I have read the reviews and yes the book does have an abuse survivor in the storyline however, lets just say this its a book and it can have different outcomes. Not every survivor acts the same way. Some are very strong and some are not. And thats where I will leave that subject. This book is a very true love story. Axel has been through some very tough crap in his life and so has Izzy. Sometimes people can go through crap and come out the other side and thats what this book is about. And Axel is just a good hearted guy who wants to protect his woman. In this book yes you will read stories of some horrible things that have happened to Izzy but this book will also tell you how Axel was there for her to help her come out the other side. Axel when you come right down to it has a heart of gold and wants nothing but to protect those he cares about and that includes the guys that make up the Corps Security Company. In my opinion this is a wonderful book. I couldn't put it down. And as soon as I did I had to move immediately on the the next one. I would recommend this book to anyone who reads this genre of books. As people know not everyone is going to like everything thats why we all have opinions and mine are that I love this book and the series.